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Re: Is It Wrong?
It tends to take me anything from ten minutes to half an hour (maybe a little bit longer) to write a poem, but then I go over it a couple ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: How do you write poetry?
Well, in person, I'm quite antisocial, but I feel more comfortable when I'm not talking to a particular person. So I use written poetry to express myself-even if I don't ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: Hold Me!
I know this is a bit late but I just came across this and read errtu's comments. And I'm sorry if I'm sidetracking a little, but, frankly, I'm appalled. Not ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: A Kiss at Dawn
I think a certain critique (I won't point any fingers) here was a bit harsh-don't ignore any of these replies, but remember that some people don't understand that it is ...
Nov 21, 2008 -
Re: How would you pronounce this?
I would pronounce it "Eh-Lan", but I don't think that would be grammatically correct (many names aren't).
Nov 20, 2008 -
Re: Great idea, or just plain stupid?
Just so you know, I probably won't start until saturday or sunday, as I have quite a lot of homework to do. Not that that stopped me from submitting another ...
Nov 18, 2008 -
Re: The Fate of Monsters
The Fate of Monsters The strike of a fist. The tie of a rope. The wail of fear. The bang of a gun. And the aftermath is red. Justice fell ...
Nov 18, 2008 -
Re: Great idea, or just plain stupid?
It is intended to be a comedy. There aren't any sections specifically for comedies, to my knowledge, so I'm thinking this would fit best into the Action/Adventure forum(?)
Nov 17, 2008 -
Re: Great idea, or just plain stupid?
Firstly, I'd like to begin by saying that the other story I started writing, "End of Innocence", probably isn't going to get any further any time soon (I'm going to ...
Nov 14, 2008 -
Re: Wearing Large Shoes
Wearing Large Shoes I have a very good friend who is an oxymoron, he is a Human Tajitu, a specimen of dualism. At times, he is the worst of people, ...
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: A Colorblind life
I quite liked this, I don't have a lot to criticise on. But I did notice one tiny thing. Are you aware that a decedent is a deceased person (thanks, ...
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: adrift
I liked this, it was dark and melancholy (I hope this is what you intended). I'm a bit confused by the "-ift" rhyming structure. The first two "I'm slowly falling ...
Nov 11, 2008 -
Re: Those two best friends
This is in tribute to my two pet dogs, one of whom died about a year ago, the other a few months beforehand. I loved them both very much. They ...
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: Forbidden
Noticed a few typos: “Alexander James Michaels.” Her stern voice make the six year old look up at his mother, his blue eyes sparkling in such a way that it ...
Nov 9, 2008 -
Re: The truth
That was really sad, especially seeing as, I think, most people can probably relate to the narrator in the second stanza. I certainly can, anyway. I can't see much to ...
Nov 9, 2008
