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  • Poetry Discussion Re: Is It Wrong?

    It tends to take me anything from ten minutes to half an hour (maybe a little bit longer) to write a poem, but then I go over it a couple ...

    Nov 22, 2008
  • Poetry Discussion Re: How do you write poetry?

    Well, in person, I'm quite antisocial, but I feel more comfortable when I'm not talking to a particular person. So I use written poetry to express myself-even if I don't ...

    Nov 22, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Hold Me!

    I know this is a bit late but I just came across this and read errtu's comments. And I'm sorry if I'm sidetracking a little, but, frankly, I'm appalled. Not ...

    Nov 22, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Kiss at Dawn

    I think a certain critique (I won't point any fingers) here was a bit harsh-don't ignore any of these replies, but remember that some people don't understand that it is ...

    Nov 21, 2008
  • Writers Corner Re: How would you pronounce this?

    I would pronounce it "Eh-Lan", but I don't think that would be grammatically correct (many names aren't).

    Nov 20, 2008
  • Writers Corner Re: Great idea, or just plain stupid?

    Just so you know, I probably won't start until saturday or sunday, as I have quite a lot of homework to do. Not that that stopped me from submitting another ...

    Nov 18, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Fate of Monsters

    The Fate of Monsters The strike of a fist. The tie of a rope. The wail of fear. The bang of a gun. And the aftermath is red. Justice fell ...

    Nov 18, 2008
  • Writers Corner Re: Great idea, or just plain stupid?

    It is intended to be a comedy. There aren't any sections specifically for comedies, to my knowledge, so I'm thinking this would fit best into the Action/Adventure forum(?)

    Nov 17, 2008
  • Writers Corner Re: Great idea, or just plain stupid?

    Firstly, I'd like to begin by saying that the other story I started writing, "End of Innocence", probably isn't going to get any further any time soon (I'm going to ...

    Nov 14, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Wearing Large Shoes

    Wearing Large Shoes I have a very good friend who is an oxymoron, he is a Human Tajitu, a specimen of dualism. At times, he is the worst of people, ...

    Nov 11, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Colorblind life

    I quite liked this, I don't have a lot to criticise on. But I did notice one tiny thing. Are you aware that a decedent is a deceased person (thanks, ...

    Nov 11, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: adrift

    I liked this, it was dark and melancholy (I hope this is what you intended). I'm a bit confused by the "-ift" rhyming structure. The first two "I'm slowly falling ...

    Nov 11, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Those two best friends

    This is in tribute to my two pet dogs, one of whom died about a year ago, the other a few months beforehand. I loved them both very much. They ...

    Nov 9, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: Forbidden

    Noticed a few typos: “Alexander James Michaels.” Her stern voice make the six year old look up at his mother, his blue eyes sparkling in such a way that it ...

    Nov 9, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The truth

    That was really sad, especially seeing as, I think, most people can probably relate to the narrator in the second stanza. I certainly can, anyway. I can't see much to ...

    Nov 9, 2008


Adventure is worthwhile.
— Aesop